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After washing your hands, you climbed up the stairs, rang the bell, clapped twice and bowed. you were visiting a shrine in Japan since you were there on vacation, seeing the sights. You were originally from America, so all of this was foreign and wonderful to you! As you bowed your head, you had no idea what to do, so you made a wish. Please, let me be successful in finding love. you wished, hoping it would come true. You had several crushes over the years, but they all just saw you as family. You had tried to go out with one of your crushes who happened to be your best friend in elementary school, but that never worked out, he never bothered to try to hang out with you. There was one guy you had fallen head over heels for, but he moved away when you were in middle school.  You sighed as you remembered this.
As you finished, you turned around and started going back down the steps. You reached the last step when you tripped over a branch. You braced yourself for the hard impact, but it never came. You opened your eyes to see a man with dark brown eyes and short black hair cradling you in his arms.
"Are you alright miss?" His voice sounded familiar. Now that you realized it, everything about him seemed familiar. Thats when it hit you.
"Kiku?! Kiku Honda Is that you?!" You asked excitedly. He looked at you confused and scared for a moment, then his face brightened.
"______? Is that you? I havent seen you since I moved away from America in middle school!" He smiled softly, recalling those days.
You blushed, realizing what position the both of you were in, as did he. He swiftly placed you up on your feet and rubbed the back of his neck.
"Would you like to catch up over some ramen?" Your crush asked, obviously wanting to spend more time with you. You nodded and walked with him to the nearest ramen shop.
You two sat in there, telling each other about what happened after Kiku moved. It was hard for him to leave his home in America, because of all the wonderful friends he left behind. You tolf him about your job as an owner of a very popular Japanese cuisine restaurant and how you were here to learn more about their food and culture. He was very intrigued. He told you about how he worked as the human personification of Japan, and you were shocked! It went on like this until closing time.
"How long are you going to be in Japan ______-chan?" He asked, his voice sounded a bit depressed.
"Only two more days... I was going to move over here,  but I dont have the money for it..." You sighed, not wanting to leave Kiku. He groaned and started walking you to your hotel.
"Well, would you like me to show you around tomorrow? I mean, If it isnt an inconvenience for you" He asked, face flushing a deep shade of pink. You took hold of his hand, he blushed deeper.
"I would very much like that Kiku!" You smiled and gave him a quick hug before disappearing into your hotel room.
The next day you spent with Kiku, exploring the culture and shopping ALOT. He showed you lots of tourist attractions as well as some places with sentimental meaning to him. Kiku made you try alot of different food that you could only find in Japan, and played games as well.
As evening was approaching, he took you to his favourite park and you two sat on the top of a hill, under a sakura tree watching the sunset. He stared at you as you looked at the sunset. Why does she have to be so cute? Kiku thought as he stared at you. You felt like you were being watched, so you turned your head to look at Kiku and your (e/c) eyes met his chocolate brown ones. His face turned red, and he reached for something behind him.

"___-______, are you cold?" He asked, noticing you shivering. You nodded and he took off his jacket, draping it over your shoulders as he put an arm around you. You leaned into his warm embrace and tried your best not to squeal. You looked up at him, then snuggled your face into his chest, trying to stay warm. You had been so comfortable, you drifted off to sleep.
Kiku stared at you asleep. 'So cute!!' He carefully picked you up and started to walk to your hotel, him still carrying you. He looked through your purse for your hotel room key. When he found it, he opened the door and gently placed you between the covers of your bed. He tucked you in then kissed your forehead and whispered "Goodnight ______. I love you..." With that finally said, he left you a note explaining what happened, then he left the room, heading home.
You woke up in your hotel room. 'How did I get here?' You were still wearing Kiku's Jacket, which made you blush, recalling the park. You wondered as you checked the clock, noticing a small slip of paper sitting in front of it. You curiously grabbed the paper, it read:
"Dear _______-chan,
You fell asleep when we were at the park. I didnt want to wake you, so I just brought you back to your hotel room. I hope that was alright. I put all of your shopping bags near your suitcase. I will come over around 10:00 am to help you take your things to the airport.
~Kiku"
You smiled reading the note. He carried you home!! You felt really bad that he had to do that, but it was really sweet of him! You looked over at the clock that read 9:49 am. Shoot. You quickly got a shower, got dressed and finished packing when you heard a soft knock at your door.
"Come in!" you yelled, zipping up your suitcase.
"Are you ready to go ________-chan?" He asked, strolling in, holding a white paper bag.
"Y-Yeah. What in the bag Kiku?" You asked, stomach growling at the sweet smell. He smiled as he handed you the bag. You looked inside the bag and smiled. Taiyaki. You grabbed one and handed it to Kiku. He smiled as you both ate them with glee and headed towards Kiku's car.
When you arrived at the airport, you checked your luggage in and returned to Kiku. He stared at you with sad eyes.
"_-____-chan, I cant believe we're being separated again" He said, tears clouding his dark eyes.
"Please dont cry Kiku, I will see you again! I promise!" You tried to be strong and smiled, but quickly tears sparkled in your (e/c) eyes, spilling down your cheeks. Kiku gave you a big hug and you openly weeped into his jacket.
"_______-chan, I have to tell you something," He said, seriously. You looked up at him curiously. "I-I Love you ______. I have since I lived in America. It broke my heart to leave you, and now I dont want to let you go again. I mean it wasn-" You cut his rambling off by pressing your lips against his, ignoring the 'awwws' coming from the small crowd behind you two. You two stayed like that until you heard the overhead speaker announcing that your flight was boarding. He pulled away, a bittersweet smile on his face. You smiled back at him as he pulled out a small photo album and a large mochi plush and handed them to you.
"Keep in contact with me okay Kiku? Maybe one day, you can come visit me!" You chirped, trying not to start crying again. He smiled and kissed your cheek.
"I will! Hopefully sometime soon too!" He let you go and watched you leave for your flight, taking his heart with you. It broke both of your hearts that it had to end that way, but you will see each other. you were both sure of it.
BACK IN AMERICA, 6 MONTHS LATER~
Youre restaurant had become alot more popular since your trip to Japan, Bringing home new recipes and food for it. You were now running a five star Japanese restaurant, thanks to Kiku. You two had been constantly emailing each other a couple of times a day, but recently he sent you none. It made you very sad. 'Maybe he moved on...' Your eyes started to water as one of your employees walked into your office.
"Miss ______? Someone in the dining area requests to see you" You sighed and got up to follow the waiter to the dining area. After being led through a maze of tables and being constantly thanked, you finally reached the table and froze. At the table sat a man with short black hair and dark brown eyes, smiling brightly.
Haha, Just a quick story I came up with ^^"
I dont own The picture, or Japan, or you...
Comment please? ^w^
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Small-Paws65 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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karmasluck Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Student General Artist
Plz.
Just.
Stahp.
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Sk8rchic2000 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
But there is no picture???
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NyanDerpy Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
HOLY CRAPOLA *dies from the amazingness* *nosebleed from KAWAIIIIIIII OK* XD XD
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haruhi-chan01 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I will always hug my mochi plush, pretending it's from Kiku, not amazon.
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ibrose12 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Awwwww x9000
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goatgirl210 Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Student Writer
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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brookerockar626 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
SUPPER CUTELove ....BUT I WISH IT WOULD OF BEEN LONGER....Waaaah! Heart 
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vues1 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Photographer
Awwwwwh~!!! XD 😁😁 such a cute story!!
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Wolfgirl1267 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Artist
Awe this is a touching story...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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HawkfireofTC Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
weirdest thing...I'm listening to Japanese music...nice fic by the way. I almost exploded with happiness at the end!
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daawww so cute
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Meowlicity Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so beautiful!!!!!!
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smileydaisy12345 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
i'm crying Waaaah! Waaaah! Clap 
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Angel434 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
OMG watashi wa endingu ga daisuki
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Hontoo? ARIGATOU GOZAIMASU!
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Angel434 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Mondainai
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KiingRadiical Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was beautiful! I also squealed "eeeeeeeee" at the ending ;w; mmmm fluffffff
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bouncingnarwhals Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
S-so beautiful~! :iconcryplz: 
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
Thank you ; w ;
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bouncingnarwhals Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome~! :D
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Sweetiepie14 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Im so jealous of myself! Yorido  Why cant this be real??   
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Orange-Flamethrower Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
SO. MUCH. FLUUUUFF~!!!! .dies of fluff and adorableness. eep
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
thank yoooooou~
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Orange-Flamethrower Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
your welcome X3
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Aoiyo Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
Watashi wa anata o aishite!
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KuroNeko870 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Student General Artist
This is my account, i'm not using it because i forgot...my...password... >:I Curse me and not writing down my password!
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Pixiegav Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D'aww that was really awesome, especially the ending. Could you possibly make a part two? I won't blame you if you can't, though...life happens.
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
It was my intention from the start ^^ it's already in the works
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Pixiegav Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, wonderful, I'll go watch you so I can find it later!
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Okay! I isn't know when I'll get it up though, I've had a bit of trouble, so I'm contemplating just leaving it a one-shot...
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Pixiegav Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I understand. As I like to say, life happens. I won't be mad if you can't finish, but I would love a part two!
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Jenn0607 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
Well like, usually it goes: reader like country, whatever plot the person has in mind, country like reader back and they live happy every after. You on the other hand, actully did somthing! :D don't get me wrong, love the traditional stuff, but I love how the person isn't thinking of the country when they wish for love, country comes in out of the blue, they happen to know eachother, ect. I especially liked the bitter-sweet ending, tagged along with him showing up at the restraunt. It was like; *dies of awesomeness*
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
^^ I do my best to think out of the box in my writing, and I am very glad you like it!
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Jenn0607 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
That was great! Way to not follow the regular reader insert storyline! I love what you did!!!!! :)
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
Regular storyline? What do you mean by that?
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Aldisunnur Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
I still love this story so much it's so cute~
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
Thank you~
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Aldisunnur Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
:) no prob
still sometime (long) ago
you said you might make another or make that one longer XD if your brain would work hard enough
I guess it didn't lolz
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
I... Did? Aahhhh! I've had so many tests and stuff coming up, I still have a bunch of unfinished works as well! I think I did start another one for this... I'll try to have it up ASAP!
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Aldisunnur Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
yes you said that XD
but don't worry you don't need too
but if you will then please just take your time and don't stress over it just work on your unfinished work first :) no rush
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
Alright! Thank you so much for understanding <3
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Aldisunnur Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
haha noprob?
well I have allot of work to do for school but I never get myself to do it ^^;
so I know how it is and also you don't really need to do another part XD
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
No! I promised I would so I will! I am a woman of my word!
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j4142000 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII OMGGG

Cliffhanger >.< :iconjapansaysnoplz:
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
More or less ^^
I'm glad you liked it!
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NabiSakura Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Kawaii!!!! ;;~;; nya♥ amazing job!!
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Thank you very much!
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rosie3454 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Awesome story!!
Daisuki!! <3
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CanadiaAmour Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Arigato!
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